Sam

**27th July**
 * WALT :** Extend our ideas by using the 5 senses to show not tell.

**Challenge:** extend the following sentence :Mrs McKinnon’s class was misbehaving.
 * Before:** //Mrs McKinnon’s class was fighting, interrupting and playing when they were not supposed to.//

Show Not Tell Using the 5 senses Watched Tim and Moby
 * We practiced strategies including:**
 * After:** //Mrs McKinnon rushed into the class as Josh threw a tennis ball threw the window and Wes lit a match and she smelt his work burning and heard the window smash.//

Use your five senses- Wes Describe it as if you were there – Josh Think outside the square – Connor Use active words- verbs – Sam Use adjectives not nouns- Connor Use similes –like or as – Josh and Wes Use metaphors – something is something- Sam and Wes
 * What we learnt/ can apply to other writing**

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Goals:  punctuation planning / structure